minty tragedy
“Yugoslavia was where the Certs & the Bosnia were fighting. Certs wanted Ethnic cleansing so they put the Bosnia’s in camps.”
“Yugoslavia was where the Certs & the Bosnia were fighting. Certs wanted Ethnic cleansing so they put the Bosnia’s in camps.”
“Technological and medical advances such as the discovery of the speed of light and the telescope helped people better understand medical mysteries.”
“during the SECONd WORld WaR, the U.S. had bEttER tactics bEcausE of thEiR fightiNg with VIEtNam thEy kNEw thEy could usE thE ENviRoNmeNt to thEiR advaNtagE, as thE VIEtNamEsE had doNE and thEy killed Germans with thEiR owN wiNtER stoRm.”
*It’s true, many of my students never really learned to write longhand, hence the random caps. One kid told me that his 4th or 5th grade teacher, when they were supposed to be learning cursive script, told the class that in the future everything would be on computers anyway so there was no point. No excuse for the rest of this randomness.
“The cold war was right after WWII and ended in the early 1990s It was a long period of cold-shouldered fighting.”
*So, what? They ignored each other and pretended to have headaches?
“the car, television, Radio, airplane and spaceship all were important invensions of the 19th century.”
*Apparently I was drunk while grading this one, because I awarded 2 out of 3 points.
- Denial
- Denial
- Denial
- Denial
- Panic
Fixed that for you.
I have more:
“The European Union had numerous consumer goods for poorer individuals. This developed during the industrial revolution and left the world more giving and seeking for things they can help.”
“Prior to the time the World came to know after 1945, the term Nationalism was not a well spred ideology. People had pride for their country, people and culture, but never saw Nationalism as a direct route to power. After 1945, however the term Nationalism took on another meaning.”
*The rest of the essay doesn’t make any sense either.
“THe monRoe DoctRine was a ReligiouS view that aFFecteD scientiFic expeRiments.”
